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想起现在的远方

子花
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Posted: 2008-07-28 22:28:40 Post subject: 想起现在的远方

【想起现在的远方】那一刻，我才开始默念你的名字无数次数着溪边的金银花开放数着脚步一位老人从黄昏的一头走近促足踏水之音，我仿佛听见岁月的苍劲那一刻，我才知道我是你体内的一尾小鱼多年后还是没有眼泪还是宠着月光醉在青石上的梦与花儿有关与水有关而那一刻灰色的立交桥路标车辆穿过了它们 ---2008年7月28日晚于58A公交车上

韩少君
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Posted: 2008-07-29 03:03:27 Post subject:

我突然想到远方不是空间而是时间那个向我走来的蹒跚的老人就是我远方的我 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-07-29 05:26:55 Post subject:

一位老人从黄昏的一头走近促足踏水之音，我仿佛听见岁月的苍劲这首有很好的感悟～

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-07-29 16:01:49 Post subject:

写得不错

白水
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Posted: 2008-07-29 18:01:59 Post subject:

自然, 真情, 诗意.

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Posted: 2008-07-30 16:18:45 Post subject:

浓浓的乡情，学习，问好。

子花
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Posted: 2008-07-31 07:23:04 Post subject:

一一谢过以上几位诗人！！！多批评，子花学习中！！

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Posted: 2009-06-20 19:11:03 Post subject:

呵,你不是我體內的小魚, 你...是我體內的一條蛔虫, 因你的什麼事情我都會知! 啟蒙教室的高人, 可恨沒能與你相見; 否則可學到你的一點皮毛; 小小的新詩的智慧! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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Posted: 2009-06-20 21:38:00 Post subject:

实话,我不会欣赏这诗,因我不明白表达什么.

子花
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Posted: 2009-06-23 13:52:24 Post subject:

sfiawong wrote:

呵,你不是我體內的小魚,
...

问候sfiawong！欢迎来新启蒙做客！

子花
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Posted: 2009-06-23 13:53:22 Post subject:

慈林 wrote:

实话,我不会欣赏这诗,因我不明白表达什么.

兄弟多指点！对于诗歌，我是一个门外汉！！

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Posted: 2009-06-23 21:50:45 Post subject:

醉在青石上的梦与花儿有关与水有关有味道！ _________________ ¤当树的叶子再次泛绿，繁华 ¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影 ¤看着春天悄悄地走来 ¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下 ◆安徽凤鸣诗社◆http://blog.sina.com.cn/fmshishe

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-06-24 03:21:25 Post subject:

的确美。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

子花
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Posted: 2009-06-28 13:53:32 Post subject:

陈若祥 wrote:

醉在青石上的梦与花儿有关与水有关

有味道！

问好陈老师！！

子花
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Posted: 2009-06-28 13:54:35 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

的确美。

拜读过你的大作和翻译诗！佩服！

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