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◇ 明月何皎皎(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2009-06-20 11:13:34    Post subject: ◇ 明月何皎皎(外一首) Reply with quote
◇ 明月何皎皎

今晚夜色好美
能比的上心中的月亮
总会听到星星的心跳
看见美丽的房子在闪光
窗前明月光
走到那扇窗前
你就会看到我了


◇ 红蜻蜓

飞虫猖狂的夏季
我守把你的窗子
我飞翔在蔚蓝的天幕里
时而滑行于岁月的小溪
我被你早晨的露珠沾湿了双浆
在空中盘旋成一枚败叶
和往事一起压成标签
夹入你的诗集里
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PostPosted: 2009-06-22 07:10:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
末三句触动了景象，但认为任一个词藻都要比(某某)好些。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-22 11:17:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
末三句触动了景象，但认为任一个词藻都要比(某某)好些。
谢谢，马上修改！
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2009-06-22 21:20:54    Post subject: 高啊！让读者与作品有了互动感。 Reply with quote
李有明 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
末三句触动了景象，但认为任一个词藻都要比(某某)好些。
谢谢，马上修改！

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