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夏日短促如死

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2009-06-15 22:12:18 Post subject: 夏日短促如死

. 《白色上的行走》举世无亲的平原腹地梧桐下攥着煤核的人午睡他在盛大夏天的骄阳里怀念冬季当下田野寂寞日光风流四溢红翅乌鸦传诵如火的枭之秘语其中的开合流转培养我平凡的内心彼时方见水鸭子出现。踏入水域向天鹅之美靠近；而我要牵着恋爱中的水草　诶诶求告大颗大颗掉泪—— 为我爱的人，放逐我于无处的人为伏妖赶鬼和预写新方言的人　哭泣呵！这异邦的夏日短促如死在浓烈空气中甜蜜的害虫几近窒息；呵！骄阳下心如刀割的人哪她可能要从矮坡走下湖底去拜谒那群唱夜歌的白色石头

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Posted: 2009-06-15 23:53:36 Post subject:

很美的意境, 欣赏这个MM好漂亮。

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Posted: 2009-06-16 02:21:14 Post subject: hao

好题目好诗歌好苦涩 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2009-06-16 02:37:17 Post subject:

乌鸦有红翅的么？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-06-16 03:23:42 Post subject:

而我要牵着恋爱中的水草　诶诶求告大颗大颗掉泪—— 很触情的语言！问好 _________________ 用想象插进诗歌的心脏！

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Posted: 2009-06-16 09:30:46 Post subject: 谢过白水、少君、地依树和杯中冲浪来读。冲浪你进来：

给你看看红翅乌鸦：其实，有没有生物学上的红翅乌鸦又有什么关系呢？在七七的诗歌里，她说有就有；冲浪不喜欢的话，也可以没有

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Posted: 2009-06-16 20:32:06 Post subject:

诗思别有情趣！问好七小姐 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2009-06-16 21:14:03 Post subject:

行到塵世異域為誰采詩來啦?
行文雖白, 帶有點詩經的寫實, 透著現代雅風.
這隻烏鴉挺漂亮,都哪裡找的這些圖片.

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白水

很美的意境, 欣赏

这个MM好漂亮。

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Posted: 2009-06-20 17:14:41 Post subject:

七小姐好啊,首次阅读你的诗歌,祝愿夏安.

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Posted: 2009-06-20 21:50:30 Post subject:

意象多而散乱,主题不清晰.诗如文章,要有主题,否则不会好. 请顺道来慈林的博客溜溜,慈林的博客己入选新浪名博. http://blog.sina.com.cn/markschen(更多、更好......尤其情诗最可读.)

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Posted: 2009-06-21 00:01:38 Post subject:

问候七小姐，诗歌多了思考。 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

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Posted: 2009-06-21 00:08:08 Post subject:

她可能要从矮坡走下湖底去拜谒那群唱夜歌的白色石头七七好，诗歌语言还是这样任性地飘逸~

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Posted: 2009-06-21 18:54:56 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

给你看看红翅乌鸦：

其实，有没有生物学上的红翅乌鸦又有什么关系呢？
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Posted: 2009-06-22 12:05:34 Post subject:

确实好劲。把冲浪馊出来看看，生物学上的，虽然有没有没有关系 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2009-06-23 13:48:52 Post subject:

才女加美女！诗歌的味道一同一般！问候七小姐

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