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乌云里的城市
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PostPosted: 2009-06-11 13:44:15    Post subject: 乌云里的城市 Reply with quote

那是一座乌云里的城市

被风吹向天空,缓慢漂移



贫民窟的人们神态凝重,饱含雨意

额头的刻痕渐渐加深,成为幽僻的峡谷

森森草木中,唐朝的巨猿阵阵哀啼

他们没有听到,亦不会听到



李白已死,杜甫已死——这不是文学常识

报童扯开嗓子呼唤钱币,钱包里微笑的钱币

蹦一下,安静地躺在地上,等于麦子



原谅他吧,如果我们心有怒意

如果在废墟之前,我们还不够理智



那就请看废墟深处——那些满面伤痕的巨人

他们从空中跌落,曾像雨滴坠入大海,如今

已经挣扎着崛起,如原始而荒蛮的山脉一般

崛起,阻断风,力擎这乌云里的城市




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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-06-11 13:58:10    Post subject: 好诗 Reply with quote

好诗。有新意。欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-11 18:17:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

浑宏, 大气,有张力的诗歌。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-13 21:35:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
好诗。有新意。欣赏。

问好韩老师,多谢点评!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-13 21:36:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
浑宏, 大气,有张力的诗歌。

多谢白水老师的品读,问好!
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