米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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 Posted: 2009-06-10 23:20:26 Post subject: 苏幕遮•雨后凤翥山 |
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雨涤新，风濯媚。柔丽莺喉，咏揭灵雀会。一抹芳菲携玉蕊。云动旌阳，趣真情若沸。
水无鳞，山染翠。绿女红男，尽作桃园味。苦乏抛却幽林荟。且沐宽悦，阆苑华亭内。 |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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| Posted: 2009-06-11 09:43:30 Post subject: |
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运刚,婉约灵动,好词!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-06-11 14:28:33 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢白云兄夸奖，这首小词是受兄的《苏幕遮》影响而作。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-06-11 14:54:30 Post subject: |
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运刚,客气了.你的笔锋,妙然生花!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-06-11 20:18:46 Post subject: |
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| 白云兄，“妙然生花”不敢当，随心随情而已。 |
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