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经年(外一首)
舒中
秀才


Joined: 11 Feb 2007
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PostPosted: 2009-06-06 12:04:25    Post subject: 经年(外一首) Reply with quote

经年(外一首)

舒中

一块铁
注定会冷却
光焰和激情
作为锈迹
一层层剥落

捻动这些粉末
还听见血流淙淙
就像一粒沙子怀揣了海
经年。无声

《风筝》

并不反抗
侵蚀和凋零
就让目光
蚂蚁啃骨头一样
日积月累
把我掏空

然后,去飞行
连一只麻雀都不如
越高。谁手里的线
左右摆布,其实
我能疼
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杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2009-06-06 15:15:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

精短。
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海静
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Location: 中国山东省滨州市博兴县实验中学
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PostPosted: 2009-06-08 15:14:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗短意丰,不错的诗歌。
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