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【望远行】 成吉思汗 【定格】
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 21:43:43    Post subject: 【望远行】 成吉思汗 【定格】 Reply with quote

【望远行】 成吉思汗 【定格】

 公元13世纪是一个天翻地覆的世纪,是一个战火纷飞的世纪,是分裂了四百余年的中国完成第四次统一的世纪,也是中国打破闭塞状态,真正走上世界历史舞台的世纪。而所有这一切都与一个伟大的名字联系在一起,这就是闻名中外的蒙古族及中华民族的英雄-元太祖成吉思汗!


【望远行】 成吉思汗 【定格】

苍穹欲坠,狼烟灭、勒马贺兰山缺。
野天一线,碧草无边,暗里曳光明灭。
哨骑如梭,篝火映红金甲,长箭雪凝冰结。
朔风中、唯有旌旗猎猎。

恣睢,疾似旋风卷雪,所向处、有谁逃劫。
掠地陷城,荡平宇内,威震地角天涯。
悲壮成吉思汗,英才天嫉,换取千秋功迹。
问史中谁似,枭雄喋血!


恣睢:任意而为。 恣,出韵。

【望远行】

唐教坊曲,原只小令,《金奁集》入“中吕宫”。北宋演为慢调,《乐章集》入“仙吕调”,又入“中吕调”,句豆小有出入。兹以“仙吕调”一曲为准。一百六字,前片四仄韵,后片五仄韵。结尾倒数第二句第一字是领格,宜去声。

【望远行】【定格】
平平仄仄,平平仄、仄仄平平平仄(韵)。
仄平平仄,仄仄平平,仄仄仄平平仄(韵)。
仄仄平平,平仄仄平平仄,平仄仄平平仄(韵)。
仄平平、平仄平平仄仄(韵)。

平仄(韵),平仄仄平仄仄,仄仄仄、仄平平仄(韵)。
仄仄仄平,仄平仄仄,平仄仄平平仄(韵)。
平仄平平平仄,平平平仄,仄仄平平平仄(韵)。
仄仄平平仄,平平平仄(韵)。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-24 13:33:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=22367

晓松请茶
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PostPosted: 2009-05-25 18:28:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

犀利 wrote:
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苍穹欲坠,狼烟灭、勒马贺兰山缺。
野天一线,碧草无边,暗里曳光明灭。
哨骑如梭,篝火映红金甲,长箭雪凝冰结。
朔风中、唯有旌旗猎猎。

恣睢,疾似旋风卷雪,所向处、有谁逃劫。
掠地陷城,荡平宇内,威震地角天涯。
悲壮成吉思汗,英才天嫉,换取千秋功迹。
问史中谁似,枭雄喋血

犀利兄,大作甚妙,入声韵用得好!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-07 18:59:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶雅赏!
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