南北客 童生
Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 22
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Posted: 2009-06-01 19:29:58 Post subject: 上一首旧作 点绛唇·春红 |
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蕾绽新枝,沙沙一阵和风舞。展眉些许,难得君多语。
名将红颜,早晚都归去。春后雨,一杯黄土,好个栖身处。 |
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米运刚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 918 Location: 四川省德阳市 米运刚Collection |
Posted: 2009-06-03 16:39:05 Post subject: |
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“春后雨名将红颜,早晚都归去。一杯黄土,好个栖身处。”先生悟得深,悟得切。欣赏并问好。 |
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南北客 童生
Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 22
南北客Collection |
Posted: 2009-06-07 05:07:38 Post subject: |
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谢先生评,问好! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-06-07 16:27:38 Post subject: |
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先生们好 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2009-06-08 04:30:26 Post subject: |
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红尘滚滚是苍桑! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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