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PostPosted: 2009-06-06 22:35:30    Post subject: 暗香 柳,次韻蒹葭蒼蒼 Reply with quote

暗香 柳,次韻蒹葭蒼蒼

煙條憔悴,問飄零身世,素心何著?
攜手河梁,攀折繁絲自輕綽。
迢遞青驄去後,都化作,繫情紅索。
誰見得,一曲陽關,微雨也搖落。

東閣,幽夢覺。記弄影中洲,解珮留約。
黛眉未展,春色三分綠芳陌。
縈損柔腸宛轉,浮泊處,萍踪難託。
又月下,家萬里,客途躑躇。

原玉:蒹葭蒼蒼 暗香 柳
【 詩路花雨 】http://www.gudian.net/dispbbs.asp?boardID=12&ID=49057&page=1

纖腰翠靨,正麗天薰日,新妝才著。
乍見河橋,眉眼依依影猶綽。
萬縷千絲折盡,空念想,天涯離索。
但守得,一樹黃昏,憔悴自搖落。

香閣,夢難覺。望浦渡迢迢,漫展清約。
東君不顧,風里長教殞塵陌。
愁極而今怎計,應早把,春心寄托。
更夜夜,魂斷處,為誰躊躇。

按:原玉末句「躊躇」應讀平聲,出律。
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