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如梦令《古渡》

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白水
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Posted: 2008-12-24 16:31:10 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

歪不正 wrote:

方识云峰雪麓，又忆叶红飘舞。
如此惜流年，只好皱纹颜驻。
羞诉，羞诉，闲却诗词曲赋。

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谢谢歪歪, 说的有些道理. 问好圣诞. Very Happy

连南河
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Posted: 2008-12-24 17:12:34 Post subject:

五律名山秀水找金龟 ——读白水 Moonlight如梦令《古渡》南海丢何处，椰风阵阵吹。名山寻彩雾，秀水找金龟。梦里闻香蒲，家中望紫薇。春来谁解步, 秋去北风回。 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

蠢读斋主人
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Posted: 2008-12-27 02:27:33 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

蠢读斋主人 wrote:

还有狐步狐步

你也喜欢跳舞

聽雲館主
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Posted: 2009-06-04 06:57:54 Post subject:

和章：恍惘此身何處？昨夜樓臺雲霧。迢遞憶當初，解珮送君南浦。回步，回步！密約幽情誰訴！ _________________ 壇前易解拈花意席上難逢顧曲心

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Posted: 2009-06-04 10:07:52 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如梦令《古渡》
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不錯:

留步留步
了断痴情难诉
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Posted: 2009-06-04 15:47:13 Post subject:

唱和俱美，十分欣赏。胡驺几句凑个热闹，以博一笑。曾记香蓼深处，吟罢信舟泊雾。诗酒酬相知，却道魂飞犀浦。余步，余步，但闻鸬鹚低诉。

白水
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Posted: 2009-06-07 00:15:04 Post subject:

问好听云老师， sfiawong，米运刚听云老师和米运刚词写的真美，白水珍藏了。

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-06-07 16:31:06 Post subject:

呵呵，原来新一轮又开始了！

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Posted: 2009-06-08 05:13:25 Post subject:

步韵和白水<如梦令>一首: * * 如梦令 * * 春夜南柯深处 , 忽现鹊桥缭雾 . 岁岁复年年 , 梦里喜逢南浦 . 同步 , 同步 , 携手并肩倾诉 ! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-06-08 19:03:06 Post subject:

聽雲館主 wrote:

和章：

恍惘此身何處？
昨夜樓臺雲霧。
迢遞憶當初，解珮送君南浦。
回步，回步！
密約幽情誰訴！

聽雲館主的诗很有意境：憶當初，解珮送君，密約幽情....
激赏！

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Posted: 2009-06-08 19:12:11 Post subject:

白云闲人写梦境：南柯梦里鹊桥会，携手并肩诉衷肠。好！

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-06-08 20:59:54 Post subject:

谢谢白水。难奈幽寂野处，叶梢一团薄雾。欲问采松人，云霞飞越清浦？却步，却步，留得诗情别诉。

聽雲館主
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Posted: 2009-06-09 06:49:20 Post subject:

戲作再叠前韻：回首已忘來處。萬里滄江沉霧。古渡再相逢，此夕還珠南浦。隨步，隨步。一段閑愁休訴！ _________________ 壇前易解拈花意席上難逢顧曲心

白水
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Posted: 2009-06-09 16:21:36 Post subject:

谢谢大家和诗，非常喜欢，收藏了。

聽雲館主
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Posted: 2009-06-10 16:51:06 Post subject:

戲作三叠前韻：來去了無知處。海市蜃樓迷霧。燈火已黃昏，遮莫駐橈前浦。停步，停步！何必含情相訴！ _________________ 壇前易解拈花意席上難逢顧曲心

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Posted: 2009-06-10 21:02:20 Post subject:

偶来看看热闹，不参与比武

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