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魏鵬展
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PostPosted: 2009-05-31 02:17:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
你的文筆不錯，但要是選出一兩個更具感染力的片段，找出有感染力的意象，詩歌的感染力會較佳。現在較流行含畜蘊藉的風格，你的風格較明快。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-31 21:08:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
魏鵬展 wrote:
你的文筆不錯，但要是選出一兩個更具感染力的片段，找出有感染力的意象，詩歌的感染力會較佳。現在較流行含畜蘊藉的風格，你的風格較明快。


看得出，魏兄是个非常真诚友善，而且学养深厚，具有较高鉴赏力的行家。
你的建议的确很中肯富有见解，值得思索，更值得朝此方向去努力。
至于流行什么，我看并不重要。任何风格，都可能出好作品，也可能出烂作品。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-01 21:01:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
"离骚和天问 冲出了
一条长江 一条黄河
滋养了千年中华诗歌的土壤"

以上道盡了屈大夫的成功處
後世盡在不言中.
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PostPosted: 2009-06-03 09:59:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
sfiawong wrote:
"离骚和天问 冲出了
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感谢您阅读喜欢和引述。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-03 13:59:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
问候老朋友司马策风！
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PostPosted: 2009-06-05 20:29:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
子花 wrote:
问候老朋友司马策风！


感谢自子花问候。好久不见了，一切可好！？

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