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七绝－端午吊屈原（新韵）

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-27 13:14:30 Post subject: 七绝－端午吊屈原（新韵）

上下求索思绪伴，东西问遍叹苍穹。诗魂冷却寻江去，韵律温余吊遗踪。

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Posted: 2009-05-27 14:24:52 Post subject:

端午又到，以旧作一首和莹雪MM：端午感怀端午悼屈原，英名万古芳。放逐处逆境，不改热衷肠。秦纳众客卿，楚驱屈忠良。望断故国远，读罢离骚伤。梦里寻桃源，他乡作故乡。

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Posted: 2009-05-27 15:58:58 Post subject:

欣赏。两首

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Posted: 2009-05-27 16:41:19 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

端午又到，以旧作一首和莹雪MM：
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谢谢qinghongGG和诗，节日快乐！

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-27 16:45:33 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

欣赏。两首

谢谢姐姐点评！
姐，节日快乐

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-05-28 04:56:12 Post subject:

唱和俱皆! 节日问好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-05-28 13:11:20 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

唱和俱皆!
节日问好!

谢谢点评！
节日快乐

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Posted: 2009-05-30 20:17:39 Post subject:

此首很规范，不足也在太规范。司马问好妹妹！ _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-30 20:53:40 Post subject:

嘿嘿喜欢在二者之间司马兄好！

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Posted: 2015-06-12 21:04:38 Post subject:

又见莹雪步丛芳，年前雅韵有余香。端午快乐！

莹雪
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Posted: 2015-06-12 21:20:35 Post subject:

我的陈年旧作，写得好稚嫩哦！

海蛎子
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Posted: 2015-06-13 01:53:34 Post subject:

起句的“索”、结句的“遗”

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Posted: 2015-06-13 01:59:57 Post subject:

减字木兰花端午又逢端午，万里天涯思故土。明月如初，跨越千山照旧庐。追今怀古，屈子悲歌难泣诉。但爱神州，壮志一腔何处酬？

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Posted: 2015-06-16 15:52:24 Post subject:

以旧作一首相和：端午来临，民间祭奠；每到此时，感慨悲伤；文/笑聊（新声韵）流水潺潺不复还，清风拂翠满坡喧。哀歌一曲山河动，默念九歌史册寒。呼啸岭南凭热血，飞沙塞外盈泪潸。民间岁岁龙舟赛，华夏精神代代传。

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