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<<黑猫的十四行>>

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Posted: 2009-05-23 17:33:58 Post subject: <<黑猫的十四行>>

<<黑猫的十四行>> 黑发演变为瀑布后黑猫发明了探戈舞步一条鱼穿梭在阴阳五行踱着方步我把光明摆渡撑杆处电光火石刺目所剩的八行苹果高梁青蛙包产到户你也来一些方步今夜的芳香注册孤独黎明开得异忽寻常的无辜是谁的皂柙树滑进鱼肚鱼和心脏顷刻停止跳动

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Posted: 2009-05-24 13:52:29 Post subject:

奇特的想象

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Posted: 2009-05-24 18:38:14 Post subject:

请大家多提意见.

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Posted: 2009-05-24 23:37:06 Post subject:

別有一番滋味 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2009-05-25 14:27:48 Post subject:

初来咋到,向各位学习.

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Posted: 2009-05-25 14:29:08 Post subject:

远握,骨笛,谢谢来访.

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Posted: 2009-05-25 16:20:25 Post subject:

数了数，一共十四行

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Posted: 2009-05-25 20:01:12 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

数了数，一共十四行　

哈哈, 這習慣不好,
人都說了, 你還數.
謂五月兮,
餘年尚七.
這詩, 若有詞風搖櫓
間來香奈孤獨, 唯不解
"皂柙树"
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Posted: 2009-05-25 21:19:45 Post subject:

哼哼，你习惯还不好些！人说的那"皂柙树"，定然是“皂荚树”瓦！听个音儿就得了呗，你还“唯不解”…… 天下第一善良的七七大人已经替东主解惑答疑了，是不是可以分$10块钱奖金呀

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Posted: 2009-05-25 23:11:30 Post subject:

湮雨朦朦 wrote:

<<黑猫的十四行>>
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奇詩..奇在黑猫天馬行空.

猫兒忽東忽西,

忽停忽動變化如孫悟空.

是萬能的黑猫.

學習, 學習了!
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Posted: 2009-05-27 14:30:36 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

奇特的想象

是啊！
很有味道！
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Posted: 2009-05-27 15:25:23 Post subject:

多谢七小姐,是“皂荚树”.

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Posted: 2009-05-27 15:31:06 Post subject:

祝愿白水先生七小姐博奕 changan sfiawong 节日快乐.

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Posted: 2009-05-27 17:48:25 Post subject:

七七第一善良小姐大人, 得您罵一句, 通體舒服. 哈哈, 玩笑一陣,大家詩人節快樂. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2009-05-30 18:56:33 Post subject: 博奕

博弈 wrote:

七七第一善良小姐大人, 得您罵一句, 通體舒服.
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大家讨论,快乐就好.

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