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鹧鸪天 端午
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 04:36:09    Post subject: 鹧鸪天 端午 Reply with quote

给各位诗友问好,请指教!

鹧鸪天 端午(新韵)

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端午偏逢烟雨茫,
千家万户粽飘香。
采撷艾叶堂前挂,
红线轻缠手臂旁。
河水漾,
百帆扬。
祭江凭吊诵贤良。
忠肝义胆乾坤荡,
一曲离骚万古芳。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 07:18:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

只是描寫,缺了點特別的意思。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-01 19:09:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

“一曲离骚万古芳” 好句!

对句还可以好些。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-27 21:23:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢过戴玨,南北客二位诗友,一并问好!
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