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Joined: 25 Jan 2009 Posts: 264 Location: dream home luluCollection |
Posted: 2009-05-23 04:36:09 Post subject: 鹧鸪天 端午 |
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给各位诗友问好,请指教!
鹧鸪天 端午(新韵)
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端午偏逢烟雨茫,
千家万户粽飘香。
采撷艾叶堂前挂,
红线轻缠手臂旁。
河水漾,
百帆扬。
祭江凭吊诵贤良。
忠肝义胆乾坤荡,
一曲离骚万古芳。 _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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戴玨 秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 808
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Posted: 2009-05-23 07:18:26 Post subject: |
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只是描寫,缺了點特別的意思。 _________________ I labour by singing light
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南北客 童生
Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 22
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Posted: 2009-06-01 19:09:29 Post subject: |
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“一曲离骚万古芳” 好句!
对句还可以好些。 |
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lulu 秀才

Joined: 25 Jan 2009 Posts: 264 Location: dream home luluCollection |
Posted: 2010-01-27 21:23:02 Post subject: |
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谢过戴玨,南北客二位诗友,一并问好! _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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