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《心中所愛》十四行
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PostPosted: 2009-05-20 03:23:53    Post subject: 《心中所愛》十四行 Reply with quote
《心中所愛》十四行 (黃亞拔,sfiawong)

妳是世上最完美,
請不要走得太遠,
每次見到月光來,
心中即想起了妳。

因心念月兒是妳,
妳就是同樣完美,
妳比明星還光亮,
雖然走了,但沒忘記。

冰清 的白手,
熱情 的愛心,
過去 的情誼,
沒人 可相比,
月兒呀, 月兒。

我永遠 懷念著妳,
永遠的 沒法忘記。

(寫詩的要: 多些骨氣, 靈氣, 勇氣, 豪氣, 和神秘!)
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PostPosted: 2009-05-20 16:09:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
拟人的描写

盼与其他诗友多交流
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 04:14:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
拟人的描写, 各位網友這個應如何是最好,最妥善的呢?

敬請各網友給一點意見!
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