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七绝《题白玉米照》

司马策风
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Posted: 2009-05-18 15:29:47 Post subject: 七绝《题白玉米照》

七绝《题白玉米照》 **司马策风玉面初开羞叶斜，忍将心事露人家。琼楼不做金枝女，愿插山野满头花。 2009，5，18 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2009-05-18 16:22:03 Post subject:

拟人化手法,读来亲切.问好司马兄! 若论玉米的味道,还是家乡的好,北美的无咬劲,家乡的糍糯,口感好, 兄感觉如何? _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-05-18 19:19:33 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

拟人化手法,读来亲切.问好司马兄!
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赞同先生之言。家乡玉米口感糯，如同乡情缠绵留人。北美的玉米如同水果，甜而脆，另一风味
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Posted: 2009-05-19 05:38:52 Post subject:

诗情画意. 好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-05-20 07:03:27 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

诗情画意. 好!

多谢白云兄来读并给予鼓励
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