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秋叶
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PostPosted: 2009-05-06 21:24:13    Post subject: 涛声回响 Reply with quote

历来江河湖海,激流瀑布是诗作的好题材, 今天翻看旧作,看到与此有关的七绝习作多首,辑录如下,请各位方家赐教斧正:



七绝-望橘子洲头

橘子青青水陆洲, 滔滔碧浪拍洲头。
楚天汉地思遐远, 汇入湘江向北流。


七绝-飞霞山

断瓦残垣荒草稠, 飞霞岭上彩霞收。
观音殿后幽泉冷, 长伴江波日夜流。


七绝-过飞来峡

浪拍断崖迎晚舟, 飞来古峡水横流。
烟波淼淼归帆远, 两岸青峰到上游。


七绝-秦淮河

六朝金粉满楼船, 泣血歌弦不夜天。
灯影摇红随浪去, 晓风残月伴吟鹃。


七绝-题北美风

五湖清水作春墨, 大瀑为笺染画图。
四海知音一网聚, 诗文雅俗尽相濡。


七绝-冰冻的尼亚加拉大瀑布

江河倾泻水天开, 千尺洪流入画来。
一夜寒风多凛冽, 冰帘玉柱挂云台。
*冰冻了的尼亚加拉大瀑布,恐怕是鲜为人知的事, 但是历史上曾经多次发生。


七绝-步韵和语风万里<<夜静思>>

语风吹送带涛声, 万里江天万里晴。
几许故园潜入梦, 一枝秋叶动乡情。


七绝-次韵和苦瓜

月下垅头影自怜, 田园夏日景千千。
苦瓜无意落流水, 萤火有情伴未眠。


七绝-新年感怀
次韵和颤抖

雪压春花未可妍, 平湖波静起寒烟。
归心已寄秋鸿去, 遥望长天又一年。


七绝-和风来疏竹

日暮孤云逐水流, 异乡漂泊几春秋。
梦回江渚故人在, 同沐清风且忘愁。


七绝-尼亚加拉大瀑布
和庆宏兄

百丈断崖落大洪, 堆霜飞雪吼声隆。
神来彩笔千秋染, 礴雾腾空绘彩虹。


七绝三首

一 Mew Lake fishing

半湖碧水绘云天,半卧含苞绿睡莲。
停浆静观浮子动,涟漪莫泛扰酣眠。

二 Geroge Falls

银龙九曲水门开, 古木横斜乱石苔。
溅玉飞珠奔夺下, 尽冲你我镜中来。
夺--入声

三 晨摄

远山如黛树重重, 晨雾飘浮散聚中。
水鸟蛙声鸣近岸, 曙光渐现霭霞浓。


七绝-印地安河初晨
河湾寂静睡渔舟, 薄雾轻飘古渡头。
蛙鼓虫鸣和远近, 朦胧树影枕清流。
和-读去声
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2009-05-06 23:55:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

智者乐水,一组咏水诗,汪洋恣肆,自由流淌,欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 02:37:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

哗啦啦的 Wink
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 05:33:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

碧 水 涓 涓 磨 墨 砚 ,
润 毫 挥 洒 好 诗 篇 .
神 来 彩 笔 添 画 意 ,
幅 幅 丹 青 心 絮 连 .
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笛里关山.
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 06:26:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

流水行云好诗篇。
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秋叶
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 08:45:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
智者乐水,一组咏水诗,汪洋恣肆,自由流淌,欣赏!


谢谢黄老师赞赏,近安!我们今次的聚会您能参加就好了。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 08:47:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
哗啦啦的 Wink



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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 09:03:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:

碧 水 涓 涓 磨 墨 砚 ,
润 毫 挥 洒 好 诗 篇 .
神 来 彩 笔 添 画 意 ,
幅 幅 丹 青 心 絮 连 .



谢谢白云兄和作,也次韵和上一首:

久未铺笺磨墨砚, 抛砖引玉求诗篇。
激流瀑布动画意, 词长诗兄一脉连。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 09:07:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
流水行云好诗篇。


谢谢庆宏兄,您是快笔之人,等您的和作啊 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 15:36:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

接龙和秋叶诗一首:

词长诗兄一脉连,
五湖四海聚同贤.
书帆笔棹春秋济,
北美枫园雅兴传.
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 17:39:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗友雅聚,心向往之,远隔重洋,待读好诗!

谢谢关注,一切均好.
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PostPosted: 2009-05-07 20:34:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏。问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-05-10 19:28:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
接龙和秋叶诗一首:
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再次谢谢白云兄和作,“书帆笔棹春秋济,”妙句,连接上下句。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-10 19:31:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
欣赏。问好!


谢谢莹雪,祝您愉快!
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PostPosted: 2009-05-10 21:53:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好…好境
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PostPosted: 2009-05-11 06:30:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
流水行云好诗篇。


谢谢庆宏兄,您是快笔之人,等您的和作啊 Laughing


眼前有景道不得,秋叶题诗在上头。 Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-05-11 21:23:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝-和风来疏竹

日暮孤云逐水流, 异乡漂泊几春秋。
梦回江渚故人在, 同沐清风且忘愁。



呵呵,这个,俺早已经收着了。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-12 13:49:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

一枝一叶,清爽可人。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-14 18:25:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

悬壶 wrote:
问好…好境


济世悬壶至,望君赠石砖。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-14 18:28:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

风来疏竹 wrote:
七绝-和风来疏竹
呵呵,这个,俺早已经收着了。


疏竹啊,俺是狗尾续貂耶 Laughing
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