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七绝游洪涯洞

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-05-09 17:15:58 Post subject: 七绝游洪涯洞

洪涯洞位于重庆市区解放碑闹市旁,嘉陵江畔,突兀百丈,新建景观依山就势,以最具巴渝传统建筑特色的"吊脚搂"风貌为主体. 闹市区中一洞涯依山就势筑新家凭栏矫首观滴翠策杖披襟赏落霞伟岸千寻悬吊脚惊涛万顷走流沙巴渝美味引来客不夜清风醉月华 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

司马策风
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Posted: 2009-05-09 19:38:25 Post subject:

伟岸千寻悬吊脚惊涛万倾走流沙黄洋兄，尤其喜欢该联。我才去看了“洪涯洞”——将古典传统和现代建筑结合得天衣无缝。妙哉！ _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2009-05-09 20:45:25 Post subject:

谢司马兄喜欢,我以为兄已离渝返加,兄见我留言否? _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-10 01:05:25 Post subject:

好一个“不夜清风醉月华“，美

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-05-10 02:33:12 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

伟岸千寻悬吊脚惊涛万倾走流沙
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气势宏，意境佳。同赏！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-05-10 02:55:58 Post subject:

谢白水,庆宏雅赏. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-05-10 16:11:35 Post subject:

江畔观景嘉,清风醉月华! 黄兄好诗! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-05-10 19:47:57 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

洪涯洞位于重庆市区解放碑闹市旁,嘉陵江畔,突兀百丈,新建景观
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黄老师，不可多得之作，我是甚爱描景之作，好诗的意境读来令人心旷神怡，共鸣忘我，回味无穷，大作即是，学习了。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-05-11 03:24:12 Post subject:

谢谢秋叶过誉了,在诗词创作上,我正在学习琢磨,向大家学习. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

野航
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Posted: 2009-05-12 13:51:41 Post subject:

伟岸千寻悬吊脚惊涛万倾走流沙好联！倾字有误。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-05-12 18:43:26 Post subject:

谢野航雅评,好眼力,"倾"字应改为"顷".已改过来. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2009-05-13 00:03:28 Post subject:

拜读，欣赏并向往之。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-05-13 01:08:00 Post subject:

谢鱼兄赏阅,欢迎鱼兄一游. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

司马策风
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Posted: 2009-05-13 19:52:43 Post subject:

黄老先生，遗憾，我不得不与5月7日回到温哥华，有事请等着我。没办法，人生就是如此！问候！ _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-05-13 21:11:40 Post subject:

同返渝州,而竟未能晤面,实感遗憾.以后有机会,当努力争取了! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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