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白水
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Posted: 2009-04-11 04:50:49 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

江城子
谁人长袖舞清音, 月华侵, 玉风临
缕缕飘丝, 春日吐芳心
雏燕绸云滑秀剪, 新乐起, 旧衣沈

半幅麻布染缸寻, 水淋淋,意霖霖
静夜银针,走线绘佳人
何必愁肠浇老酒, 君慢饮, 莫多斟
...

飞针走线，灵动洒脱。欣赏白水为人为诗。

问好冰清,谢谢你的鼓励. Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-11 04:53:51 Post subject:

自然风 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

谢过老师作和, 临屏草和, 见笑:
...

韵律似有误？

不好意思, 最近瞎忙,没看见 Embarassed

你指那首韵律有误, 盼告.谢谢探讨 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-04 16:25:05 Post subject:

七绝《借名题诗》四月春停碧柳枝，烹冰调酒闹瑶池悬壶轻点三杯雪，小醉桃红信手诗

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-06 16:46:59 Post subject:

七绝《和借名题诗》微风染就柳摇枝，梦里飞歌别瑶池。感念流光旋日月，泼墨丁香巧入诗。问好姐姐！水姐姐想我不？

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-07 02:30:46 Post subject:

想啊。只是微感小恙，暂无诗绪，本应和诗才是

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-07 14:02:43 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

想啊。只是微感小恙，暂无诗绪，本应和诗才是 Embarassed

没关系，姐姐先好好休息，细心呵护调养，别劳累。愿姐姐快快康健

早日文采飞扬！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-05-07 15:26:14 Post subject:

接龙依韵和白水.莹雪<题诗>一首,请笑纳: 小醉桃红信手诗 , 飞歌霄汉到瑶池 . 梨花绽似丰园雪 , 莺唱双双戏柳枝 . 问好白水! 保重! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-07 20:31:56 Post subject:

接龙依韵和白水.白云闲人<题诗>一首,请笑纳: 细看梨花意入诗，闲观几度卧瑶池。旧姿疑是随冬雪，新态应时伴柳枝。问好白云闲人! 快乐!

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-05-08 04:35:50 Post subject:

接龙依韵和莹雪<题诗>: 新态应时伴柳枝 , 春风送我赴瑶池 . 凝望仙境花如雪 , 即席挥毫婉约诗 ! 问好莹雪! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-08 13:39:39 Post subject:

问好白云，莹雪。草和，见笑：）泼墨挥毫婉约诗，莹花飞雪漫春池闲来欲借白云笔，洒向枫林洗绿枝

晓松
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Posted: 2009-05-10 15:57:50 Post subject:

接龙依韵和<题诗>：洒向枫林洗绿枝，桃花溪水涨春池。闲人妙笔云当纸，挥就人生七彩诗。近来读白云闲人《抒怀咏志篇》系列，心为所动，有感而发。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-05-10 17:27:17 Post subject:

谢晓松兄的鼓励! 接龙依韵和<题诗>: 挥就人生七彩诗 , 晓松徽墨蘸春池 . 生花羊毫东风舞 , 枫苑芳菲漫翠枝 . _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-05-10 20:38:16 Post subject:

泉－秋叶－在岩层中穿行在地热里酝酿终于喷涌出炽烈的诗行朗诵着激动，纯洁的篇章一生中流淌着春的鸣唱夏的热情秋的爽朗倒影着雨后的霓裳闪动的萤火不灭的星光白水兄，和呀

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-13 13:34:11 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

接龙依韵和莹雪<题诗>:
...

接龙依韵和白云<题诗>:
呵呵，这几天出游，大家这么热闹呀！
游兴深浓赏柳枝，
醉吟浅淡梦闲池。
新歌意境如冰雪，
旧梦幽思却酝诗。

问好白云！

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-13 13:59:18 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好白云，莹雪。草和，见笑：）
...

接龙依韵和白水“兄” Razz

<题诗>:
醉态辛勤巧入诗，白花清水满幽池。
且抛墨迹清文债，浓染枫林秀绛枝。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-05-14 04:55:23 Post subject:

啊! 莹雪你刚出游归来,一定拾趣满心池,等待你把沿途的花香蝶舞趣闻倾囊授诗,分享春天的无限风光! 接龙依韵和诗一首: 旧梦幽思却酝诗 , 春游拾趣满心池 . 花香蝶舞倾囊出 , 分享风光拂柳枝 . _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-14 13:51:30 Post subject:

WOW, 这么多好诗，我得细品品

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-14 23:08:03 Post subject:

明见

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-01 12:42:30 Post subject:

七绝《和一字通》一字通渠天际流，古今中外任飞舟红枫含笑迎宾客，墨海欢歌载雪鸥一字通原玉：七绝．敬赠诗友们诗山学步总埋头，未把真情厚谊丢。独向屏前遥寄语，新年快乐请君收。

白水
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Posted: 2011-02-04 16:19:56 Post subject:

七绝《读冷雨〈中国年——除夕夜有感〉有感》塞外迎春忆古城，秦砖汉瓦缀宫灯长安一别乡情远，数载未闻炮仗声冷雨原玉：中国年——除夕夜有感猛虎归山啸林风玉兔辞娥离月宫太平盛世唯华夏爆竹声声年意浓

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