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湘女

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Posted: 2009-05-04 17:28:42 Post subject: 湘女

湘女湘女，你为何多情静也盈盈动也盈盈你的美目是一泓春水凝也盈盈流也盈盈湘女，你为何多情梦也娉娉醒也娉娉你的红唇是一团艳火笑也娉娉嗔也娉娉湘女的情是水冰清玉洁汇入情郎的波心湘女的情是火狂野不羁烧掉负心人的假情湘女的情是水湘女的情是火胆怯的情人请不要靠近请网友思考: 1, 湘女真是多情吗?为何有此说? http://blog.sina.com.cn/markschen(更多、更好......尤其情诗写得最好.请来慈林的博客看看.慈林的博客入选新浪名博.)

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Posted: 2009-05-04 17:30:24 Post subject:

<湘女>写作札记小妞,我的小情人,离我而去，是注定而且早知的，我也不反对。但此事真的来临，心中总有些戚戚然。小妞是个好女孩，性情耿直，爱憎分明，挺有个性，我很喜欢。小妞是湘女，人们总说湘女多情，我就试想用此题作一首诗以怀念这段情。想了几天终写成。

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Posted: 2009-05-04 21:04:38 Post subject:

是女皆多情，不惟湘女。 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2009-05-04 21:23:02 Post subject:

湘女多情~古有其说~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-05-05 06:10:56 Post subject:

我的诗都是有感而发,是真性情,与小妞相恋八载,从大陆至美国,年龄相差21岁.那些真情日子,在无眠的夜,仍逐一浮起.

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Posted: 2009-05-05 10:53:45 Post subject:

真性情就好

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Posted: 2009-05-05 15:52:07 Post subject:

抗战八年，弹尽粮绝。终于独立，恭喜恭喜。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2009-06-07 05:01:52 Post subject:

赢得独立,但很痛苦, http://blog.sina.com.cn/markschen(更多、更好......尤其情诗写得最好.请来慈林的博客看看.慈林的博客入选新浪名博.)

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Posted: 2009-06-07 21:22:22 Post subject:

花开人独立不语燕单噙多情虽湘女更多是慈林不过若非盈盈去怎得此时新 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2009-06-07 21:27:12 Post subject:

传统的写法，运用好了，一样出色。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-06-09 06:52:59 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们的评点. 请顺道来慈林的博客溜溜,慈林的博客己入选新浪名博. http://blog.sina.com.cn/markschen(更多、更好......尤其情诗写得最好.)

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Posted: 2009-06-09 20:27:31 Post subject:

慈林 wrote:

湘女
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世界已變,湘女雖有情,但也有不真.
不比古代的湘女,誰個湘女不多情?
會否有錯誤引導?令人不知所操,是真,是假,確不易分!
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Posted: 2009-06-09 22:39:13 Post subject:

说得正是,现代的情,离不开铜溴味,变质了.但诗是美好的.

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