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四月橙花开 ---怀念才女林徽因
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PostPosted: 2009-05-01 21:25:39    Post subject: 四月橙花开 ---怀念才女林徽因 Reply with quote

四月橙花开
---怀念才女林徽因


你为何如此洁白
一如她忧郁的容颜

你为何如此芬芳
一如她兰馨的气息

你在树上绽放
她在天上展容

你和她都是春天的使者
美丽着我如水的梦


请顺道来慈林的博客溜溜,慈林的博客己入选新浪名博.
http://blog.sina.com.cn/markschen(更多、更好......尤其情诗写得最好.)
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PostPosted: 2009-05-02 05:08:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

简洁
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PostPosted: 2009-05-02 08:07:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

简洁,是我诗作的特点.我喜欢在一目了然的文字下,散出浓郁的诗意.
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PostPosted: 2009-05-02 09:29:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

浓,浓 Very Happy
林前美女不是你亲戚吧 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-05-02 23:54:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

是我精神的恋人.
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PostPosted: 2009-05-03 00:31:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

简约的一首.
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PostPosted: 2009-06-10 05:25:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友们的评点.

请顺道来慈林的博客溜溜,慈林的博客己入选新浪名博.
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PostPosted: 2009-06-10 10:32:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

简短不乏味道
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