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五单元 27楼

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-01 04:42:33 Post subject: 五单元 27楼

五单元 27楼这一刻你眼里正滋生春天这一刻你语言拧成绳索这一刻你忘记了那个人这一刻你打开通往春天山峰的大路啊等待是枝头上的花蕾不要月光的手指嗲气的娇吟谄媚的靠近只要台风的粗暴把欲望花瓣扯成碎片这一刻我正领略春天这一刻我被紧紧捆绑这一刻我听见床痛苦扭曲的声音这一刻他正往床里钉钉子这一刻我融进春天迷失于绚烂的风景中

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-01 19:33:18 Post subject:

新颖的标题, 不拘一格的诗

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-02 03:58:45 Post subject:

谢诗人赏读，感激中。。。。。。。。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-03-02 05:19:29 Post subject:

只要台风的粗暴把欲望花瓣扯成碎片学习了~

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-02 15:19:49 Post subject:

谢诗人评。祝好！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

孙慧峰
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Posted: 2007-03-03 17:37:44 Post subject:

海军好

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-04 01:58:40 Post subject:

慧峰兄元霄节快乐 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-03-04 03:00:31 Post subject:

感觉组织上有点乱。呵呵。问好 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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