悬壶
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 Posted: 2009-05-02 12:56:48 Post subject: 马帮二首 |
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《一》
日出春城马出关
烟连茶岭雨连山
玉门东望秦楼客
夜向长安驮月还
《二》
戈壁茶香连古国
江南浓馥出阳关
萧萧黑马枪林去
满驮青山日月间
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秋叶
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| Posted: 2009-05-02 17:26:43 Post subject: |
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| 读大作如临塞外，(入声)旧声韵用得妙！ |
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悬壶
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| Posted: 2009-05-03 05:54:46 Post subject: |
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问好秋叶
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-05-03 09:37:56 Post subject: |
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塞外风光书简上,
悬壶笔下景斑斓.
连绵泼墨关内外,
情愫丝丝行里间.
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野航
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Location: toronto
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| Posted: 2009-05-03 15:47:46 Post subject: |
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好，声韵辞采俱佳。
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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悬壶
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| Posted: 2009-05-03 16:32:20 Post subject: |
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问好白云野帆二位
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