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【原创】四月花开

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Posted: 2009-04-21 03:46:40 Post subject: 【原创】四月花开

四月花开一四月，离柔软很近，离坚硬很远清晨，一滴露珠打中我的要害心思睁开。有花由眼睛开始说出温暖，说出爱二四月走近，就宣布着三月作废我前世的孩子，今生的爱人撕掉瘦日历，你乘风而来三我在厨房煮一壶清酒等你，优雅的诗人房门正对着街道和人流旁若无人的开着四当远方落座于对面杯子已压不住写满内容的纸张凌空一跃，碎了，醉了 2009.04.18 _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-04-21 05:20:18 Post subject:

写满内容的纸张凌空一跃，碎了，醉了 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2009-04-21 16:25:54 Post subject:

是~及时说出温暖说出爱~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-04-22 13:00:08 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2009-04-23 22:57:49 Post subject:

感谢楼上三位的支持！祝好！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-04-29 16:28:07 Post subject:

写满内容的纸张凌空一跃，碎了，醉了很有感觉的诗行

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Posted: 2009-04-29 19:35:23 Post subject:

送你一首小诗,因与[四月]有关. 四月橙花开 ---怀念才女林徽因你为何如此洁白一如她忧郁的容颜你为何如此芬芳一如她兰馨的气息你在树上绽放她在天上展容你和她都是春天的使者美丽着我如水的梦

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Posted: 2009-06-17 10:57:01 Post subject:

原创和兹林的赠诗都很好读来依旧清新。再顶一次。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2009-06-17 15:56:40 Post subject:

感谢白水和少君！更感谢慈林的赠品！先行谢过！远握！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-06-19 00:11:44 Post subject:

四月，离柔软很近，离坚硬很远清晨，一滴露珠打中我的要害心思睁开。有花由眼睛开始说出温暖，说出爱四月走近，就宣布着三月作废我前世的孩子，今生的爱人撕掉瘦日历，你乘风而来這是多麼的可愛! 一如情人的等待! 已入來,飲杯吧,女詩人! 問好! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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Posted: 2009-06-21 00:07:35 Post subject:

楼上的朋友，感谢你的支持！看你的口气应该是男生了，那么就让我在这里祝福男生们今日快乐！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-06-21 02:05:47 Post subject:

“房门正对着街道和人流，旁若无人的开着 ”喜欢这样的感觉。 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

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