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追她
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 07:11:38    Post subject: 追她 Reply with quote

追她


追逐她的眼神
如追逐神秘点点星光

追逐她的秀发
如追逐春树柔柔绿浪

追逐她的红唇
如追逐月下幽幽花放

追逐她的丰乳
如追逐蜜奶甜甜甘香

追逐她的一切
她的一切却恍若幻象

幻象无处不在
让痴情的我追得发狂


请网友思考:

1, 这首诗主要用了什么表现手法?
2, [她]是指什么?
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nobody
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 15:28:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

最怕考试。您快告诉我吧 Laughing
她指什么都可能,就是不指她。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 20:10:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

很想告诉答案给你,但我想多些网友思考及作回答,请耐心等等.
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安红红
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 22:09:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

她是渴望的事物~包括属于明天所有的东东~或是梦境~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-29 19:27:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢安小姐的鼓励.
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