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七绝题安洁“庐山仙人洞”照（应安洁之邀而作）

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Posted: 2009-04-29 03:35:14 Post subject: 七绝题安洁“庐山仙人洞”照（应安洁之邀而作）

[size=x-small]您老人家再写一个仙人洞吧，老毛都写了[/size] [/img] 七绝题安洁“庐山仙人洞”照（应安洁之邀而作）司马策风面壁吕仙得道飞，白云黄鹤久相违。洞松互看两不厌，冷眼江天论是非。吕仙：吕洞宾 2009。4，29 附：七绝题李进同志（江青）所摄庐山仙人洞照毛泽东暮色苍茫看劲松，乱云飞渡仍从容。天生一个仙人洞，无限风光在险峰。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2009-04-29 05:17:09 Post subject:

"冷眼江天论是非",结句不拘眼前之景,而能拓展言之, 思路更进一层. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-04-29 07:50:11 Post subject:

冷眼江天论是非 “冷眼”用的特好！只有冷静理智，才能留给人一片清醒。

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Posted: 2009-04-29 17:49:20 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

"冷眼江天论是非",结句不拘眼前之景,而能拓展言之,
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多谢黄老先生厚爱鼓励！
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Posted: 2009-04-29 17:51:34 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

冷眼江天论是非
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谢谢冰清大姐喜欢点评。久不见了，问好！
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Posted: 2009-04-30 06:33:23 Post subject:

黄鹤白云，冷眼江天。

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Posted: 2009-05-03 18:57:33 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

黄鹤白云，冷眼江天。

多谢您喜欢！握！
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Posted: 2009-05-05 16:32:19 Post subject:

面壁吕仙得道飞，白云黄鹤久相违。紧切主题。久违了，司马兄！

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Posted: 2009-05-06 04:42:15 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

面壁吕仙得道飞，
白云黄鹤久相违。

紧切主题。久违了，司马兄！

感谢晓松兄关注问候！好久不见，问候您。
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