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纥那曲 仙境
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PostPosted: 2009-04-20 02:15:08    Post subject: 纥那曲 仙境 Reply with quote
纥那曲 仙境（新韵）

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（一）
湖畔水清清，
柳枝摇曳情。
恬然观旷野，
何处纥那声？

（二）
田野草青青，
彩蝶忙不停。
赏花望碧野，
听唱纥那声。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-20 04:50:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
意境清新,自然流丽!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-20 06:32:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
问答用得妙。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-21 00:35:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
原谅我寡闻，何为“纥那声”？
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 05:04:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
白云闲人 wrote:
意境清新,自然流丽!

谢白云老师赏评及鼓励！lulu给您问好！
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 05:05:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
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问答用得妙。

谢庆宏老师表扬，学生给您问好！
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 05:11:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
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原谅我寡闻，何为“纥那声”？

给您问好！谢谢您的赏阅，我也是刚刚领会该词牌，请多指教！

纥那曲：单调二十字，四句三平韵
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