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如果敞开心扉

云冰之南
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Posted: 2009-04-19 15:43:55 Post subject: 如果敞开心扉

如果敞开心扉巧克力，奶油的花样甜甜的和着可乐或者地道的凉茶下午，田园，晚风微微习来之前这就是我敞开的心扉你随意地品味还有烈酒二锅头，威士忌乡下来的谷烧干柴燃起青焰，却潜水游弋岸边，沙滩，篝火闪烁光亮之前这就是我敞开的心扉你随意地畅饮我还有什么那利剑划破的伤口已被眼泪洗礼愈合痕迹似雾，所以我抬头直腰，叹息随水而去我还有什么往事如风吹钝了镰刀那一茬茬的庄稼自由生长，所以我收获不在于季节敞开心扉，甜食送给女人烈酒送给男人，当原野最美丽的时候那生锈的锁黯然失色我，把成批的礼物搬上街头 _________________ 江西赣州罗方义电子信箱：fangyi-66@163.com 博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/fangyi66

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-19 16:48:11 Post subject:

敞开心扉，天地会更宽阔

云冰之南
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Posted: 2009-04-20 16:44:53 Post subject:

感谢白水留言! _________________ 江西赣州罗方义电子信箱：fangyi-66@163.com 博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/fangyi66

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2009-04-21 05:18:37 Post subject:

敞开心扉，甜食送给女人烈酒送给男人，当原野最美丽的时候那生锈的锁黯然失色我，把成批的礼物搬上街头 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

安红红
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Posted: 2009-04-21 16:28:19 Post subject:

怀揣着美好~期待并向往~就是取之不尽用之不竭的礼物~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

云冰之南
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Posted: 2009-04-22 02:20:40 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

怀揣着美好~期待并向往~就是取之不尽用之不竭的礼物~~

问好~

确是如此,感谢!
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沐诗雨
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Posted: 2009-04-22 19:37:35 Post subject:

潇洒,豪放,问好老乡,也在赣州

云冰之南
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Posted: 2009-04-22 21:06:09 Post subject:

沐诗雨 wrote:

潇洒,豪放,问好老乡,也在赣州

感谢!问好沐诗雨!
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