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花事
下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-03-02 11:36:55    Post subject: 花事 Reply with quote

花事
是被东风泄漏的

风太温柔
惊动了
淡绿的新色
躲进路边的垂柳


正在安静的开
在城市的缝隙
不管你正在衰老
它们
挤满消瘦的枝头
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PostPosted: 2007-03-02 20:03:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

花事
是被东风泄漏的

引人的启始句
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PostPosted: 2007-03-03 08:02:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

简洁有意味!
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PostPosted: 2007-03-04 23:42:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

花事
是被东风泄漏的

风太温柔
惊动了
淡绿的新色
躲进路边的垂柳


正在安静的开
在城市的缝隙
不管你正在衰老
它们
挤满消瘦的枝头
好东西,结尾值钱。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-04 23:46:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

有新意的写作手法。好
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PostPosted: 2007-03-07 01:32:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

很随意地清淡着,如懒散的阳光,淹过皮肤
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