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七绝和黄洋界老师《游蓉城宽巷子窄巷子》

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Posted: 2009-04-17 11:56:23 Post subject: 七绝和黄洋界老师《游蓉城宽巷子窄巷子》

七绝和黄洋界老师《游蓉城宽巷子窄巷子》到处动工修大厦，四合院子变珍玩。古迹保护无人问，只看当前只认钱。

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Posted: 2009-04-17 16:40:14 Post subject:

谢庆宏赐和,庆宏又一份担心,适合民居的四合院,确已所剩无几. "只看当前"四字可否换成"不顾遗产"四字? _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-04-17 17:08:10 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

谢庆宏赐和,庆宏又一份担心,适合民居的四合院,确已所剩无几.
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谢谢黄老师指出。我也曾考虑过用“遗产”。但此句格律为仄-平-仄，第四字应该用平声，而“产”是第三声仄声字，故不能用。

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