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網吧

博弈
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Posted: 2009-04-16 09:16:42 Post subject: 網吧

網吧許多小蟲子掛在網上櫃檯的蜘蛛精一小時來收８塊 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-16 09:43:51 Post subject:

８塊台币还是美元？

nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
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Posted: 2009-04-16 09:45:06 Post subject:

形象，贴切，逗趣。确实是蜘蛛精而不是蜘蛛。蜘蛛就过去吃了。蜘蛛精养着收钱。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

博弈
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Posted: 2009-04-16 11:05:30 Post subject:

哈，8块台币相当于2块人民币吧，记得以前有一阵子上海是这个价钱。不过，选8，还有循环缠绕，收钱路线，大卸八块的用意。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

博弈
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Posted: 2009-04-16 11:13:24 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

形象，贴切，逗趣。
...

谢解毒，
看来 nobody 也去过，
都吃的无身体了。 Wink

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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

榛莽
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Joined: 13 Apr 2009
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Posted: 2009-04-16 20:20:17 Post subject:

微型诗的形式，短诗的结构，三行之中包含了无形的转换！赞！ _________________ 榛莽博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/qinzhenlin712 邮箱：qinzhenlin712@126.com

nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
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Posted: 2009-04-19 13:01:01 Post subject:

很喜欢这个，提读。简短地描述了一群人的生存状态，时代的特征。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2009-04-19 14:27:55 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-19 17:05:31 Post subject:

博士，这首诗歌真不错，内涵现代，敛句却不亚于古人

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2009-04-19 23:56:02 Post subject:

不错，形象生动~

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