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《大车巷》

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Posted: 2007-03-02 22:09:25 Post subject: 《大车巷》

《大车巷》时间，在天亮之前赐予我们快乐香烟，啤酒，金黄色的歌声与我们同醉，不留一丁点缝隙许久没有像水藻的簇拥一样嬉戏了这足以让我们在春天里模仿鸟类的欢愉足以让温暖的词语在一杯果汁里想象夜晚被剥开的时候我们在南大街，在大车巷的顶端摇晃手臂，倒在醒来的早晨 <深夜12点> 夜晚的腰身有些凌乱渐渐熄灭的灯盏令苍白的手语无边我还是忍不住大声嚷嚷 "往上一点,再往上一点" 把陷在镜子里的假声连根拔起那一刻,我学会了"落马观花" 衔着杂草,躺在简陋的巢里发着低烧然后,清洗一张张陌生的脸像赶场的道具一晃而过......

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Posted: 2007-03-02 23:23:46 Post subject:

惟妙惟肖的词语在大车巷的顶端摇晃手臂， _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

三色堇
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Posted: 2007-03-03 03:09:18 Post subject:

你熟悉这个地方吗，昨天晚上我们几个写诗的朋友，在那里开心的聚会呢.

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Posted: 2007-03-03 06:11:34 Post subject:

读你的诗, 为你们乐. 我还真不知大车巷在哪? 南门附近?

孙慧峰
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Posted: 2007-03-03 17:37:10 Post subject:

问好三姐~

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Posted: 2007-03-03 21:13:10 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

读你的诗, 为你们乐.
我还真不知大车巷在哪? 南门附近?
Very Happy

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是的。离钟楼不远，你对西安很熟悉吗/

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Posted: 2007-03-03 21:15:58 Post subject:

青海湖
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Posted: 2007-03-04 18:14:54 Post subject:

每一次相聚都有新感觉，愿三姐保持这份敏锐的触觉。

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Posted: 2007-03-04 23:00:36 Post subject:

聚会的再现，好传神：）

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Posted: 2007-03-04 23:49:38 Post subject:

《大车巷》时间，在天亮之前赐予我们快乐香烟，啤酒，金黄色的歌声与我们同醉，不留一丁点缝隙许久没有像水藻的簇拥一样嬉戏了这足以让我们在春天里模仿鸟类的欢愉足以让温暖的词语在一杯果汁里想象夜晚被剥开的时候我们在南大街，在大车巷的顶端摇晃手臂，倒在醒来的早晨白描，细节，惊艳的意象，文人醉态，刻画入木三分，问好。 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

郦楹
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Posted: 2007-03-05 06:12:12 Post subject:

姐姐厉害：）

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-03-05 07:08:40 Post subject:

欣赏~

柏铭久
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Posted: 2007-03-06 05:55:57 Post subject:

更加随意和轻松了,更好了,问好三色妹妹 _________________ 柏铭久：诗人，中国作家协会会员，重庆万州区诗歌创委会主任，曾在《诗刊》《人民文学》《十月》《中国作家》及海外报刊发表大量诗歌，获“重庆文学奖”等多种奖。作品被多种选集选用。

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