云冰之南
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 Posted: 2009-04-14 15:27:38 Post subject: 爱，很是具体 |
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爱，很是具体
等你的信飞驰而来
真的，听得到你的语言也要看汉字的方正
就像不在乎日历上某日某时立春
只要一朵朵花开一棵棵草绿
一只鸽衔来阳光
需求，就这样执拗
一枝烟里，点燃的时候回味
回味时，或灰烬
或飘逸
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| Posted: 2009-04-14 15:39:08 Post subject: |
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还不错，继续努力。
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云冰之南
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| Posted: 2009-04-14 16:25:31 Post subject: |
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感谢nobody的留言,共同切磋!
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2009-04-14 16:35:38 Post subject: |
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回味时，或灰烬
或飘逸 |
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云冰之南
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| Posted: 2009-04-15 02:56:14 Post subject: |
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| 感谢半溪明月看过来 |
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子花
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| Posted: 2009-04-15 14:31:36 Post subject: |
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| 小诗歌小韵味！不错！ |
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云冰之南
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| Posted: 2009-04-15 17:39:23 Post subject: |
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感谢子花哦
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