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锈锁[外一
张凡修
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PostPosted: 2009-04-15 16:06:45    Post subject: 锈锁[外一 Reply with quote

锈锁[外一

文/张凡修

我一直担心土坯房会返回泥土
里面有我一双年久失修的鞋子
而把门的锁锈着


倒塌的危险已经不是一天两天了
我不能说出一座五十年的茅屋
无论开窗关窗。牙齿
都四面漏风。所有的表情
是不是,一次意外的骨折


只能抠一条通道钻进去
兜里的钥匙,正好儿
镶一枚掌钉


[拒绝农谚]


大旱不过五月十三。他等雨
等得地里的小玉米,蔫巴了身子
七九河开,河不开。八九燕来,燕不来
老天爷一次又一次的玩笑
让他学会拒绝。农谚
从爷爷辈儿爸爸辈儿传到他这辈儿
似乎越来越不让他信服


因为拒绝,一个活在农谚里的人
长了骨气。因为拒绝
他把节气当牲畜般使唤
该打打,该骂骂,该起早起早,该贪黑贪黑
唯独一次,一场身份不明的大雨
下了六天。突然在傍黑儿消失以后
他脱口说出----
哦,晚晴十八天

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云冰之南
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Joined: 12 Apr 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-04-15 17:43:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

有个性的语言,有特色的联想!问好!
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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PostPosted: 2009-04-16 16:33:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

人心不古,天心也不古了。
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-04-18 17:04:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

唯独一次,一场身份不明的大雨
下了六天。突然在傍黑儿消失以后
他脱口说出----
哦,晚晴十八天

喜欢的语境和表达,第一首更好~
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