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七绝五首锦城春雨

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-04-02 02:37:46 Post subject: 七绝五首锦城春雨

七绝五首锦城春雨一春雨潇潇锦水滨千竿翠竹洗微尘烟迷碧树莺欢语野径潜惊柳色新二野径潜惊柳色新桃波李浪草如茵袭人花气盈襟袖万树松风落醉巾三万树松风落醉巾无边春色慰嘉宾四方来客开怀笑情酿花红醉乱神四情酿花红醉乱神菜肥苔绿结芳邻银犁激赏青牛劲蜀地农家不患贫五蜀地农家不患贫勤劳致富乐苦辛耕耘播种知节令春雨潇潇锦水滨 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2009-04-02 06:07:48 Post subject:

黄兄,春诗荡漾显缤纷,开怀欢笑意情真,桃红柳绿千重浪,一组皆句最醒神! 接口依韵和诗一首(望着窗外晨空雪花缤纷有感而赋,万物自得人间四季同佳景,神爽襟宽日日欢笑渡世尘!) 春雨潇潇锦水滨 , 梨花漾漾洛基晨 . 银妆红粉同佳景 , 神爽襟宽渡世尘 ! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-04-02 14:16:12 Post subject:

黄老师锦城春诗自接龙，妙！白云老师两地佳景好和诗！

野航
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: toronto
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Posted: 2009-04-02 14:25:58 Post subject:

轴辘体，自然和美。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-04-02 15:14:36 Post subject:

美景、美诗、美心情。

王君明
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Posted: 2009-04-02 17:44:53 Post subject:

拜赏大作,春意盎然,情怀清新,读来感奋不已. _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-04-03 00:16:01 Post subject:

谢白云兄赐和佳作,谢庆宏,,野航,米兄王兄点评. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2009-04-03 05:31:33 Post subject:

我在锦城侧，不敢多欢悦。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-06 14:15:42 Post subject:

黄老师，好一组田园新作，即续貂一首，当否？春雨潇潇锦水滨，诗人放足踏轻尘。花团锦簇寻无路，客舍嘉宾酒几巡？足，簇:入声

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-04-07 01:38:01 Post subject:

谢鱼兄赏阅,谢秋叶赐和. 秋叶,您如果有机会旅蓉,尽可流连伫足. 这里毕竟是杜甫寓居生活过的地方啊! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-07 10:46:45 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

谢鱼兄赏阅,谢秋叶赐和.
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谢谢黄老师建议，去秋到九寨沟经过逗留了一天，的确不错，参观了武侯寺和青羊宫，没有到杜甫草堂，日后有机会一定再去。

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-07 15:29:22 Post subject:

好游,好诗, 好和.问好黄老师

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-04-08 00:36:20 Post subject:

谢白水评阅,问好白水! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2009-04-13 23:28:54 Post subject:

也许我接触的底层学生多，看到的辛酸多。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2009-04-14 00:10:35 Post subject:

鱼兄,也许是接触不同,感怀不一吧. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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