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终于,你站到了季节的门槛外
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PostPosted: 2009-04-12 02:22:01    Post subject: 终于,你站到了季节的门槛外 Reply with quote

1 就这么病了

甚至怀疑, 那些油菜花
是不是有意守侯纷落

跨过季节路口的艰难,说出来
也不过是一阵寒潮,一串喷嚏
只是,春阳却从此迷糊了
并且病得不轻

2 就这么俗了
现在,公主王子在纸上泛着黄
你开始专注于皮囊
不再等春天,等桃花

“累!”你常常抱怨
然后,哈哈地笑着,拾人牙秽
像所有烟火熏出的女人一样
脸颊不飘半点红云

3 就这么老了
有时候,你也追忆那花开时的惊艳
追忆那涂满心事的纸片,想曾经的燃烧
想那些你无法阻挡的风,和雨

于是,沟壑开始流淌
坑坑洼洼渐渐布满你的肌肤,你的心田
终于,你站到季节的门槛外
旁观别人的春天
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PostPosted: 2009-04-12 04:09:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

细腻的观察, 真实亲切
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PostPosted: 2009-04-19 12:52:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

就这么老了
..
站到季节的门槛外
旁观别人的春天

想想 。。。
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