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拈花微笑
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Posted: 2009-04-11 04:04:43 Post subject: 落花人独立

我屏住呼吸与一朵带雨的梨花对视在这轻寒的薄暮里不知谁会先沉不住气 _________________ 瞠目结舌

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-11 04:57:02 Post subject:

梨花早断气儿了

博弈
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Posted: 2009-04-11 12:24:29 Post subject:

微雨燕双飞我屏住呼吸与一雙呢喃的燕子对秒在这微暖的斜陽里不知谁会最後離開 ---- 誰來往下接? _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2009-04-12 00:32:02 Post subject: 走笔情挥洒

深呼吸之后与一群黑白的文字对峙这彩色的剧情中每每是我先行投降 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-04-12 01:59:33 Post subject:

呵呵,投降的手啊还怎么敲得出一行行的文字

拈花微笑
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Posted: 2009-04-12 02:35:30 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

微雨燕双飞
...

呵呵，有趣。俺再来：

微雨燕双飞

我烘干了头发
和那只
斜飞的乳燕比翼

在这微雨的黄昏里
不知谁
会先弄湿羽毛
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博弈
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Posted: 2009-04-13 06:57:06 Post subject:

记得小萍初见泥屏住呼吸成一雙汪汪的镜湖决堤北方初春的濛尘里不知苹果开花了没 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

拈花微笑
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Posted: 2009-04-13 16:15:40 Post subject: 当时明月在

当时明月在那也是四月的夜银辉下樱花落满了双肩说了什么已忘怀只记得那纤指玉一样凉滑 _________________ 瞠目结舌

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:23:50 Post subject:

哈哈哈哈~~~~~~~~ 想闷s我呀~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:25:16 Post subject: 也好~~~~我看成，对表了。晚点啦！

博弈 wrote:

微雨燕双飞
...

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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:26:12 Post subject: 你这个不对，怎么先投降了。错错错~罚酒加罚诗。

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

深呼吸之后
与一群
黑白的文字对峙
这彩色的剧情中
每每是我
先行投降

_________________
梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:27:47 Post subject: 要和烘烤熟的乳燕比翼。你估计会赢~~罚你！哈哈哈哈~

拈花微笑 wrote:

博弈 wrote:

微雨燕双飞
...

呵呵，有趣。俺再来：
...

_________________
梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:28:56 Post subject: 有情调~~~奖励一杯酒~`

博弈 wrote:

记得小萍初见
...

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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:30:08 Post subject: 哦哦哦哦？都不记得啦？罚酒！

拈花微笑 wrote:

当时明月在
...

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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

拈花微笑
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:33:48 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

拈花微笑 wrote:

当时明月在
...

没人能记住泰戈尔的诗，是因为，他的每一句都好。。。 Laughing

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红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:36:05 Post subject: 花和人一起断气~~

哈哈哈h~~~~~~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-13 17:40:46 Post subject: 打岔，嘴还硬，再罚！

拈花微笑 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

拈花微笑 wrote:

当时明月在
...

没人能记住泰戈尔的诗，是因为，他的每一句都好。。。 Laughing

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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

博弈
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Posted: 2009-04-13 20:26:16 Post subject:

红袖，嗯，也该来添个乱，我们都是公鹅啊说不出典雅的好话。。。。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2009-04-13 21:29:45 Post subject: 饮酒催诗性

红袖添乱 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

深呼吸之后
与一群
黑白的文字对峙
这彩色的剧情中
每每是我
先行投降

饮酒催诗性

我屏住呼吸
与一杯
呛鼻的威士忌搏击
在酒精冲到脑门之前
希望能
凑几个句子还你
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可情可理，去捧就真

博弈
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Posted: 2009-04-14 05:12:27 Post subject:

再来一个曾照彩云归那杯一碎方休的月光啊直到烛冷星唏嘘说的是不会忘记常在心彩云追月成往昔糟,油上韵了 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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