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让我，掐死你吧

衣楼
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Joined: 06 Jul 2007
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Posted: 2009-04-10 00:51:43 Post subject: 让我，掐死你吧

走出去走出去，夜空比我白月亮比我白对角的路灯比我白从迷彩斑斓的灯笼里走出的女人还比我白旧叶子都悄然而逝盖住我的风衣，风衣盖住我我有三张白纸一张写明梦想一张印下规矩一张沾满了油烟的痕迹只是当它们交汇我被迫站上交点，仿佛墙角让我，掐死你吧对桃花说，桃花红了对苹果说，苹果熟了对你说你笑嘻嘻地当成玩笑妖怪来临我的脸变成猪肝色恋你猜，我在哪里，哪里都行随便说个地名。要你说话……

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2009-04-10 17:46:51 Post subject:

前两首很不错，炽热迷乱一样的语言很富有色彩~

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2009-04-10 17:50:36 Post subject:

很强的视觉效果, 有趣

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