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浓雾
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 07:46:56    Post subject: 浓雾 Reply with quote

* * 浓 雾 * *
.... ( 一 ) .....
..... 无 奈 .....
<调寄转应曲>

无 奈 ,
无 奈 ,
似 织 漫 漫 雾 海 .
烟 吞 四 野 灰 帏 ,
朦 胧 一 片 路 迷 .
迷 路 ,
迷 路 ,
难 抉 如 何 举 措 !
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 08:14:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云兄,人生就这样不断感悟和感奋着的!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 09:31:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢冰清鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 10:07:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

* * * 浓 雾 * * *
....... ( 二 ) .......
....... 往 前 .......
< 调 寄 转 应 曲 >

迷 惘 ,
迷 惘 ,
泊 则 随 时 被 撞 .
回 头 却 半 中 天 ,
唯 望 致 力 往 前 .
前 往 ,
前 往 ,
迎 来 晴 空 日 朗 !
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 11:39:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活小事以小见大。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 14:21:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

似 织 漫 漫 雾 海 .
烟 吞 四 野 灰 帏 ,
朦 胧 一 片 路 迷 .


白云兄,好意境,小心驾驶 Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 05:16:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢庆宏君雅评!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 05:18:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢秋叶赏评和关心! 问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 15:39:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

人生感悟在人生
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 15:46:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水赏评!
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