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咏春（二首）

冰清
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Posted: 2009-04-06 09:11:11 Post subject: 咏春（二首）

盼春半倚春台半倚窗，焦心难耐遍枯黄。何时惹得庭中鸟? 惊觉寒鸦卸旧妆。 *春台者,饭桌也.（03/12/2009）报春蘖芽开遍笑枝东又报郁香一点红昨夜时霖来小叙重逢用是绿茸茸（03/31/2009）

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-04-06 09:52:46 Post subject:

冰清,好个盼春接报春,春来重逢绿茸茸! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-06 13:31:45 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

盼春

半倚春台半倚窗，
焦心难耐遍枯黄。
何时惹得庭中鸟?
惊觉寒鸦卸旧妆。
*春台者,饭桌也.（03/12/2009）

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冰清老师，春天来了又走了，今天再下起雪来，同题和一旧作，望斧正：

雪压春花未可妍，平湖波静起寒烟。
归心已寄秋鸿去，遥望长天又一年。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-04-07 01:58:47 Post subject:

喜读春诗二首.又是一年春草绿,谣祝冰清又一春. 秋叶同题和诗好.抒发了对春天的期盼之情. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

风来疏竹
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Posted: 2009-04-07 02:28:55 Post subject:

也以一旧作，和冰清并问好。春风拂我满身尘，衰草重生天地开。着墨不题桃李色，一汪春水付诗怀。 2009、02、03

冰清
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Posted: 2009-04-07 08:38:37 Post subject:

谢过白云兄黄兄。北美之春姗姗来迟，我是有些耐不住啊！

冰清
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Posted: 2009-04-07 08:43:40 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

盼春

半倚春台半倚窗，
焦心难耐遍枯黄。
何时惹得庭中鸟?
惊觉寒鸦卸旧妆。
*春台者,饭桌也.（03/12/2009）
...

冰清老师，春天来了又走了，今天再下起雪来，同题和一旧作，望斧正：
雪压春花未可妍，平湖波静起寒烟。
归心已寄秋鸿去，遥望长天又一年
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谢过秋班，接龙一首请指正。

遥望长天又一年
犹思啼鸟断崖边
天心最怕飞鸿远
踏雪更知朔气癫

冰清
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Posted: 2009-04-07 08:46:39 Post subject:

风来疏竹 wrote:

也以一旧作，和冰清并问好。
春风拂我满身尘，
衰草重生天地开。
着墨不题桃李色，
一汪春水付诗怀。
2009、02、03
...

竹子好，学一首：

一泓春水映心台，
草长莺飞俊眼开。
纵有寒烟来遂事，
东风依旧入情怀。

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-07 10:34:56 Post subject:

谢谢冰清老师和作，天心最怕飞鸿远踏雪更知朔气癫好句！ “青崖边”似是三平调，供参考。也谢谢黄老师赞赏，问好！

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-07 15:26:38 Post subject:

唱和具佳, 来偷听一个问好冰清和竹子

冰清
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Posted: 2009-04-08 04:23:33 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

唱和具佳, 来偷听一个 Very Happy

问好冰清和竹子

偷听?
等你大作，白水!

冰清
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Posted: 2009-04-08 04:40:13 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

“青崖边”似是三平调，供参考。
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说的对，秋版。当改“青崖”为“断崖”（陡峭的山崖）。

王君明
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Posted: 2009-04-09 23:50:39 Post subject:

来欣赏唱和,问候! _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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