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【梦】---新出炉,还热着
子花
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 01:10:08    Post subject: 【梦】---新出炉,还热着 Reply with quote

【梦】
1.
不知夜几时 双眼突然打开
电闪雷鸣,雨跟风一盆盆倾倒在窗台
摔在梦的深处 有点冷
试着轻轻拉紧被单裹住那个梦
那个梦的结束或开始

双眼一直打开 不敢眨
生怕丢失梦里的细节
生怕一滴泪水打败一个男人的尊严

呼吸推动着冷空气
带点清泣 谁也没听见
像风雨声中夹着
刮过残垣的呻吟

2.
就三个场景
三个场景就
构成了我的梦境
构成了我一整夜的痛苦

以黑夜为背景
它们在闪电中撕裂我的睡眠
像电影的情节
在脑中录下不能泯灭的胶卷

每播放一遍
闪电就离我更近一点

3.
两部手机挨着安放枕边
寂寞 像失去主人的小狗
在梦里突然想起你
你锋利过刀子的红唇
我曾经膜拜过的双脚

而在梦里
你一去不复返
这个季节从此就抽走了花开
在一地残败中
我给你发了条短信
那穿越时空的疼痛 我还记得:
人鬼情未了

我还记得那刻
闪电中狰狞的面孔 扭曲的微笑

4.
我怀着这个梦彻夜疼痛
我怀着这个疼痛回忆另一片疼痛

另一片疼痛像水
渗进我的骨髓 在今晚
又溢出覆盖我的身体
从新要渗透到内心

我怀着这个疼痛对抗另一片疼痛
如闪电撕裂黑夜又成全了黑夜
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 17:22:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

趁热抢沙发
怎么有点痛? Cool
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PostPosted: 2009-04-03 05:39:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

人鬼情未了........
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我把天空装在我家里,鸟儿天空中飞来飞去
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安红红
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PostPosted: 2009-04-03 06:20:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

梦是一个奇怪的现象~是另一个现实现象吧~~
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2009-04-03 17:10:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

梦之痛来自内心!问好子花!
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子花
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PostPosted: 2009-04-05 14:06:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢白水,骨笛,安红红,山城子几位老师阅读!!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-17 00:53:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

提上给第六期!谢!!
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