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原筱菲
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 06:00:31    Post subject: 删除此贴 Reply with quote

本人清除网络文章,删除此贴。谢谢论坛老师们曾对小菲的鼓励和支持^_^
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 17:07:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

很纯, 很活跃的诗歌, 90 后都成长起来了, 真令人高兴.有些诗句写得生动, 纯洁,可爱.比如:

叶子的指缝间偷偷膨胀
像女孩的
一个个小幻想

翘翘的小嘴
依然像一朵花开

吮吸月光的植物一一睡去

小石榴可以做成裙子
让男孩们
拜倒一生
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 21:27:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师鼓励哦^_^
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 22:18:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错~透着清辙的光芒~

多读多写~把自已最深的感受化进词语里~~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-04 05:46:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢姐姐(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
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PostPosted: 2009-04-05 04:41:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

这么小的孩子,太有才了
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