lingquan.yang 童生
Joined: 29 Mar 2009 Posts: 70 Location: 中国云南 lingquan.yangCollection |
Posted: 2009-04-03 00:33:45 Post subject: 致大地 |
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严霜和冷风垂怜竹和松柏
落尽枯叶的树林咬紧枝丫颤抖
深邃浩渺的天空失去激情的太阳
眼睁睁无助地羞赧
如戟的树杆灰暗的面孔
没有激荡冲动的树液
带着大地的体温来唤醒萌芽的信念
我多想化作一只鸟儿
唱婉转的歌谣安慰树们
让沉睡的大地眷顾深秋的树
让彩色的树液自大地之腹
像乳浆一样哺育颤抖的枝丫
好开满绿叶和鲜花
来应和我如玉如泉的歌唱 _________________ 走在历险的途中 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2009-04-03 01:11:50 Post subject: |
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流畅~ |
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骨笛 秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2009 Posts: 547
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Posted: 2009-04-03 05:04:39 Post subject: |
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歌谣///////// _________________ 我把天空装在我家里,鸟儿天空中飞来飞去 |
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lingquan.yang 童生
Joined: 29 Mar 2009 Posts: 70 Location: 中国云南 lingquan.yangCollection |
Posted: 2009-04-04 03:13:35 Post subject: |
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谢谢明月,问好! _________________ 走在历险的途中 |
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lingquan.yang 童生
Joined: 29 Mar 2009 Posts: 70 Location: 中国云南 lingquan.yangCollection |
Posted: 2009-04-04 03:15:46 Post subject: |
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问好骨笛!多指教! _________________ 走在历险的途中 |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2009-04-04 22:32:11 Post subject: |
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 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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