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煤矿准军事化(组诗)
齐凤池
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PostPosted: 2009-03-25 03:59:54    Post subject: 煤矿准军事化(组诗) Reply with quote

煤矿准军事化
(组诗)


齐凤池

准军事化


煤矿准军事化是个什么概念
工人一直没搞清
他们猜
是准新娘的意思
拿了结婚证没办婚礼
就做了几次人流
煤矿整天的稍息立正向哪看齐
象美国西点军校
或象盖世太保的集中营
在这种狂躁中
感觉父亲在
鬼子刺刀下的挣扎
矿警手拿警棍
巡视像死了多年的骨头
在走动
井下安插的眼线
像狼青黑背的嗅觉
虽说没有皮鞭棍棒
但奖金的鞭子
工资的棒子更叫人
皮不痛心疼


敬礼


词典说敬礼
是向尊敬的人做的一种手势

战士向首长敬礼
是对首长的
一种尊敬
工人向矿长区长敬礼
不知是哪位鸟人定的规矩
一只布满老茧的手
举向半空
他们看不到
老茧上的疼痛伤疤
和岁月风干的血汗
当他们接受这种昂贵的敬礼
身体的某个部位已经
被一种内在的气功击中


摄像头


矿里不知什么时候
安装了许多摄像头
摄像头藏得很诡秘
人们吸烟弥漫话题
吐痰喷泻的口水
脚步跨过了界限
都逃不过贼的一只眼
这些摄像头
安插在角落象上个世纪
潜伏下来的汉奸
像贼一样躲矸子的背后
猫在挖净的煤壁里
潜伏在淙淙的下水沟
眼睛不眨的盯梢
发现一粒煤尘跳动马上汇告
每天有很多人经受着
金钱的拷打
和岁月的酷刑

靠右走


进矿靠右走
下班靠左走
象交警谁定的规矩
每天早晨
工人们排着整齐的队伍
缓慢地在白线拦截的小道上
低头向前蠕动
又像缓慢爬行
他们面容沮丧步履沉重
感觉参加遗体告别

灰色的办公大楼
像殡仪馆的调子
罩着没有眼泪的哭丧
戴执勤袖标的矿警
像治丧人员
工人围着灰色大楼绕一圈
像瞻仰了某个人的仪容
再从左边回去
过去高高兴兴上班来
平平安安回家去的标语
被风雨粉刷成白色
整个煤矿
感觉是吊唁的氛围

2009-3-24
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PostPosted: 2009-03-25 21:16:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

读着笑,读完想哭~~

问好~真实写照~~

另外~诗歌的整体排版乱~以后注意些~
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PostPosted: 2009-03-26 13:50:43    Post subject: 老师好 Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
读着笑,读完想哭~~
...
感谢提醒.下次注意, Very Happy Evil or Very Mad
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