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俏丽申城（上海行组诗之十六）

山城子
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Posted: 2009-03-25 17:03:20 Post subject: 俏丽申城（上海行组诗之十六）

俏丽申城（上海行组诗之十六）文/ 山城子 1、是谁在俏丽着申城明年的五月吗太多的客人届时莅临不能褴褛或怠慢了心情十里洋场的洋后代们肯定优越而来让兴叹或挫折备侯着吧他们的曾祖做梦也想不到的情景嘿嘿这很让我高兴 2、情景是广阔地群起摩天比肩欣慰早经沉没的历史沉没了租界和匍匐腾挪的破烂不堪现在车也高空地下地画出优美的秩序和弧线东方玉立的美人步履翩翩款款 3、款款翩翩的步履顾盼生辉建筑群都穿上了浅色干净的衣衫路中坦露着胸花遮顶的橘红帽夜里也放着亮颜等待客人也等待自己心气正沿着春天蔓延谁唱《东方之珠》黄浦江流成的乐谱弹奏不完 2009-3-26于上海（通讯地址：561104 贵州省平坝县红湖学校李德贵） _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-25 18:32:27 Post subject:

问好山城子老师，大家正为你担心呢。看你这么悠哉，忍不住乐了

刘浪
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Joined: 04 Dec 2008
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Posted: 2009-03-25 19:42:47 Post subject:

问好您！上海行依旧绵延不断，继续关注。 _________________ 是金子也会花光地

安红红
同进士出身

Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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Posted: 2009-03-25 19:48:29 Post subject:

俺也想上海行一趟了~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

秦城诗客
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Posted: 2009-03-25 22:58:13 Post subject:

好诗，喜欢您的语言！

山城子
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Posted: 2009-03-25 23:41:02 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好山城子老师，大家正为你担心呢。看你这么悠哉，忍不住乐了 Very Happy

——我都不为我担心，你们担心什么？还是乐好！
_________________
诗是人生的雅伴儿。

山城子
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Posted: 2009-03-25 23:43:15 Post subject:

问好刘浪！我还会写下去的！问好红安安——来读，就是对我的鼓励！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

山城子
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Posted: 2009-03-25 23:47:09 Post subject:

秦城诗客 wrote:

好诗，喜欢您的语言！

问好诗客！
谢谢鼓励——我还将继续在语言上用力。
_________________
诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-26 18:28:45 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好山城子老师，大家正为你担心呢。看你这么悠哉，忍不住乐了 Very Happy

——我都不为我担心，你们担心什么？还是乐好！

这不是贵州地震吗

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