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下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-02-27 07:12:21    Post subject: 征伐,温柔,失题 Reply with quote

今夜

我派出
一队精锐之诗
从五千年前
到五千年后
征伐
所有的暴君

时间已把你们
碾做尘灰
历史的笔墨
还有我的无辜人民嫉妒仇恨空洞阴冷的眼神
我看到
你不散的阴魂

嗅到了我的仇恨
我的文字察觉了我的悲愤

他们唤醒这个早春
一夜花海
在梦里肆意妖艳直至荼烂
谁欺骗我梦里没有色彩?
这些愤怒的花开
挣脱我的视线

这个春天浩大
温暖的风究竟已经吹到多远?
我终于可以入睡

请你们包围那高墙之后深深的宫殿
还有妓院那粉红色的界限
顺便抚慰客死的枯骨
和落魄的野鬼


天亮前
我将派出
另一只温柔之诗
在汨罗江边
和西子湖畔
寻觅
倾城的缠绵
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PostPosted: 2007-02-27 08:41:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

确有不凡之处。很欣赏。有气魄,不拘束。

顺便探讨一下诗外的东西。关于历史政治等等,我本人更倾向于不把责任推到任何个人身上,应由全体人民承担,包括我们自己。暴君与人民不对立,而是相生。他们身上之可恨,卑鄙,无人性,代表了每个人身上的这些特征。只是以不同的方式,在不同的层次表现而已。

多言了。
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下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-02-28 07:43:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

暴君是专制的产物,是体制的病症。我们还是不讨论政治了,很多人不喜欢。:)


透明的樊笼,只有囚徒知道残忍。谢谢,有机会交流。
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吾河已殇
吾贤夭亡
沃土空乏
礼崩乐丧
大河广原
巨国横权
江山无语
而你我已狂
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