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飘扬
衣楼
童生


Joined: 06 Jul 2007
Posts: 54

衣楼Collection
PostPosted: 2009-03-13 19:11:19    Post subject: 飘扬 Reply with quote

长疯的小花溢出山坡
在冷暖交迭
硝烟裹着迷香的
战场。一棵树撑开旗帜飘扬

于是年轻的阳光
穿透黑夜的琵琶骨
锁链一串,脚镣叮当
并挥一挥手
把所有挑战者变为奴隶

我便想长此温情地看着窗外
立起一个人的身影
立起旅行者,并关于
自由的意志
在我们出生长大的地方不谓牺牲
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安红红
同进士出身


Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

安红红Collection
PostPosted: 2009-03-14 03:15:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

于是年轻的阳光
穿透黑夜的琵琶骨
锁链一串,脚镣叮当
并挥一挥手
把所有挑战者变为奴隶

有立体感~声色齐全~~

问好~常来~多写~
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