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三月刀伤

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Posted: 2009-03-10 17:13:48 Post subject: 三月刀伤

三月刀伤隔年，你依旧如影子般端坐在我的胸口 _____题记三月终究是要来的要来的还有怒放的桃花，春风以及过敏一切都来的锐不可当，只有年的刀伤宛若新生何以描述北方的冷漠夏日塔拉的孤独和黑水河畔的流浪者 52°的酒试着去清醒一个死去的灵魂，可是痛楚是醒来的唯一途径太阳衍生的光芒无所不在不能因为闭上眼睛就算遁入黑暗碑后的故事是用旧了的时间，唯有决然转身，带着马儿一路西行其实，应该把三月裁剪成衣放入橱中年年桃花凋谢时取出用来遮蔽隐忍的刀伤 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2009-03-11 11:34:03 Post subject:

缘何隐着淡淡的痛? 愿你一切都好.

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Posted: 2009-03-13 03:45:05 Post subject:

夏日塔拉的孤独这里面的“塔拉”是一个名词还是两个字？夏日的太阳把光投在塔上，那么有一面总是阴影，谓“塔拉”，——使人想到一座孤塔把影子拉长，静止的孤独的感。非常好的词。也可能是一个地名猜想 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2009-03-13 16:07:39 Post subject:

琼姐.过来学习. 还是在思考你的简练是怎么弄出来的. 还有一种整体的基调. 喜欢题记.真是厉害 _________________ 88年的。

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Posted: 2009-03-13 16:33:48 Post subject:

闪亮的句子比比皆是！！欣赏

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Posted: 2009-03-13 21:04:51 Post subject:

好诗！喜欢！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-03-14 03:06:20 Post subject:

读起来会疼～～只是总来不及裁一件合适的衣服～伤来的总措手不及问好～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-03-14 13:06:37 Post subject:

好久不见你的诗了。现在读起来还是那么让人感动。非常喜欢！！顶！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2009-03-16 22:44:03 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

缘何隐着淡淡的痛?

愿你一切都好.

问好白水！日子就是快乐和痛并存着，你说是吗？？
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Posted: 2009-03-16 22:46:03 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

缘何隐着淡淡的痛?

愿你一切都好.

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Posted: 2009-03-16 22:53:26 Post subject:

上城 wrote:

夏日塔拉的孤独
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问好上城！

夏日塔拉是这儿的一个地名，是一片美丽的草原～我非常喜欢的地方！

其实你的猜想和我的对夏日塔拉的想象差不多，感觉很有意境的名字～～
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Posted: 2009-03-16 22:55:42 Post subject:

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琼姐.过来学习.
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谢凯凯来看我～～

希望你常来北美枫，这里有很多的优秀诗人，姐姐不算的～～～
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Posted: 2009-03-16 22:59:09 Post subject:

问好子花，娇娇！感谢评读！红红，你说是不是总有一些伤来的让人毫无防备～～问好你！我喜欢你的诗歌！谢海军来看我～对于我的还久你见不着，笑～那是因为懒～谢你的挂念！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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