孙国福 童生
Joined: 08 Feb 2009 Posts: 63 Location: 吉林长春 孙国福Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-06 04:49:45 Post subject: 乞丐 |
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《乞丐》
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一个圆盘
几枚零钱
屈下的双膝
比流泪的语言可怜
塞北的寒风
一次次无情的抽打我的脸 _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑 |
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骨笛 秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2009 Posts: 547
骨笛Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-06 05:53:36 Post subject: |
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塞北的寒风
一次次无情的抽打我的脸********悲怜之心尽显... _________________ 我把天空装在我家里,鸟儿天空中飞来飞去 |
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晴宝儿 秀才

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Posts: 666
晴宝儿Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-09 08:58:59 Post subject: |
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无情的现实及诗人内心的悲悯无奈! _________________ 晴宝儿 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-10 15:09:41 Post subject: |
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很有冲击力 |
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