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平行线（外一首）

彤欣
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Posted: 2009-03-07 16:20:41 Post subject: 平行线（外一首）

平行线文/彤欣左边是你右边是我相隔的距离不是银河仅管我们之间没有相连的纽带数学概念的王国里我们还可以用另一种方式存在 -------重合被遗弃的女人文/彤欣这间屋子黑暗潮湿霉味摇晃着碎纷纷地落满每个角落门紧紧关着你坐在屋子中央一口一口地品尝沉积多年的苦涩你不想走出去哪怕外面有伸向你的手你只是在等等锁上这扇门的那个男人回来

金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2009-03-07 19:42:57 Post subject:

很有柔性，继续写吧！问好！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2009-03-07 22:29:44 Post subject: 可怜

等锁上这扇门的那个男人回来可怜。何必。如临其境。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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